Cropping and Embossing C& E

Yesterday I put in a lot of work on Cropping and Embossing. I have been dying to get to my revisions since the last Playwriting Lab but there have been many interruptions to that end. So now I have yet another draft - move developed and more streamlined. I think I have clarified a few issues and Incorporated in more character development for Maya and Adrian. There is still more to do but I have to work in stages. I would like to get at least one more draft before Dec 17th when I submit it for the reading at 10 Days of Madness. I need to send it out for feedback. It needs new eyes.